The novel is overwritten and the attempts to mimic ancient Egyptian speech patterns fall short. However, the musicality and depth of the work are noted as impressive.
The review from 'A Son of the Rock' offers a mixed perspective on 'Ancient Evenings'. They acknowledge that Mailer makes a fair attempt to mimic ancient Egyptian speech patterns and phraseology, but ultimately find the novel to be overwritten. Despite this, they note the musicality and depth of the work as impressive. The review suggests that while the book has its flaws, it also has moments of greatness that make it a compelling read. They appreciate the ambition and effort put into the novel, even if the execution is not always perfect.
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Mailer makes a fair enough attempt to mimic ancient Egyptian speech patterns and phraseology but in the main the novel is overwritten, which ...
The beginning was staggering, and I was floored by the musicality ...
It was knocking on the door of greatness, and I was floored by the musicality ...