The story starts well but becomes too detailed and slow, with an interesting protagonist that doesn't fully develop. The characters and dialogue feel anachronistic and bland.
The reviewer found the beginning of the story engaging, with a protagonist that showed promise. However, they felt the narrative became bogged down by excessive detail and a slow pace. The characters and their dialogue were criticized for feeling out of place and lacking depth. The reviewer's overall impression was one of disappointment, as the potential of the story and its characters was not fully realized.
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The story itself started well enough, if slow and too detailed about minutiae for my liking.
The protagonist was shaping up interesting.
But as soon as she ...