This book would have made a great graphic novel, but as a work of fiction, it falls apart at the seams.
The reviewer feels that the book's strengths lie in its visual and imaginative elements, which would have been better suited to a graphic novel format. They find the plot to be disjointed and the characters poorly developed, leading to a less satisfying reading experience. Despite the book's unique setting and humor, the reviewer finds it lacking in coherence and depth. They appreciate the creativity but feel that the execution falls short.
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This would have made a great graphic novel, but as a work of fiction, it falls apart at the seams.
Homunculus reads like a mash-up of various elements that don't quite gel together.
The plot is disjointed and the characters are poorly developed.