The debut novel feels rushed and tries to pack too much into its narrative. The writing lacks the depth and polish expected from a more seasoned author.
Samantha Kilford found How to Kill Your Family to be a bit of a let down. She felt the story was trying to do too much, resulting in a narrative that felt rushed and underdeveloped. The characters and plot points didn't have the depth she would have liked, making the overall reading experience feel somewhat trite. While there were moments of intrigue, the execution fell short of her expectations, leaving her with a sense that the novel could have benefited from more refinement and focus.
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Simply put, How to Kill Your Family is trite.
It is Mackie's debut novel and the inexperience and desire to pack too much into it was clear.
A thin plot and underdeveloped characters left the story feeling unfinished.