While the writing is great, the story lacks the fun and wittiness expected from the author. The reviewer was let down by the overall narrative, finding it less engaging than other works by the same author.
The reviewer acknowledges the quality of the author's writing but expresses disappointment in the story's lack of fun and wittiness. They expected more from the narrative, finding it less engaging compared to other works by the same author. Despite the engaging protagonist, the story falls short in delivering the expected entertainment and depth, leaving the reviewer somewhat dissatisfied.
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Jacqueline Wilson's writing is great as always, but the story itself didn't have as much fun and wittiness as I remembered.
I was pretty let down by this, but the protagonist is still engaging.
It falls short in delivering the expected entertainment and depth.